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Ayush Kashyap's avatar

Broooo this was so good, i love when stories do not explain themselves and this was really one of those. From start to end the grip you had over conversations, the characters' movements and descriptions was so wonderful and inspiring. This was devastating in the best way possible, bro you are such a dope fiction writer, will surely re read this♥️🫶🏻

Also I think the neighbor and the sister are the only real characters, rest are imaginary and the sister gets shocked because you have killed the neighbor too assuming he is a part of imagination if i'm right?

Arunima's avatar

THANKYOUUU and yesss the neighbour and sister are real you're correct :))))

Ayush Kashyap's avatar

Just started this and very random but did you read the vegetarian before this?

Arunima's avatar

i actually started this piece before finishing that book and now that I've finished it the day before yesterday, I see what you mean 😭😭😭

Ayush Kashyap's avatar

I could see the inspiration and references, that is why i asked😭

Sakshi's avatar

oh my god i don't even know what to say this was so insane you're such a great writer. this one was so breathing unlike anything I've read, so disturbing and intriguing, I loved it through and through, you're insanely good it's not even comprehendable 🫶🏻🫶🏻🫶🏻

Arunima's avatar

:') you have my heart

parnika's avatar

wow damn, fiction is definitely your thing babe! you da real writer 🙇🏻‍♀️

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🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩thankyou so much

samayra's avatar

WHAT

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AHAHAHA💗

☕️دل's avatar

Woah fiction and you never disappoint me, even when i was reaching the end i still couldn't figure out where this was going and i might not have gotten the plot completely but damn the writing is just so so immaculate, every sentence stitches with another in a perfect rhythm ahh loved the mother and old lady's part the most. Please keep these coming, also i need to look inside your brain cuz damn the idea is insaneeeeee.

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Very grateful

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🥹🥹🥹🥹💗🥹💗🥹💗thankyou Sweetheart I wanted to make her sorta in a very schizophrenic type of a situation and in the end the blood she's covered in is actually hers because obviously the intruders do not exist lol and for me the piece is about identity and trauma and autonomy :))))

☕️دل's avatar

YEASSS I ALSO GUESSED ITS SCHIZOPHRENIC TYPE STUFF

YOU WERE PEAK WITH THIS ONE I WAS SO INVESTED THE WHOLE WAY

Arunima's avatar

🥹💗💍

prachi's avatar

oh my God

this was harrowing, in the best way possible

absolutely adore this piece, Arunima <3

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🥹🥹🥹🥹I'm so happy you read this!! And I'm so grateful for your words💗💗💗💗 thankyouuuuuuuuuuuu darling